Lord Anzius

Uhhh. Slave traders and a majesty......-.. I will read the third chapter soon, this was so good that I didn'tfind anything... Maybe there is nothing.. (or then there is, I'm ...

HEAR YEE. I must firstly say... I'm exhausted.... It is sooo much easier to read from a book... Easier for my poor eyes.. but anywayz :backtotopic: The idea (as already ...

INK HEART::::::::::::: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE SERIES!!! (WITH the eragon series, septimu heap series, zamonia series and the bartimaus and harry potter.) I can't remeber what happ

OK.. in this crit I will give you the truth and nothing but the truth: first the compliments: Great idea. A lot of text is always good. Good description. Good ...

Disturbing.. good but it gives me the creeps. UGH. SUICIDE.... that seemes like a quite used topic now. I have seen about five of them within one month..... Good anywayz. ...

Nize :) Rock song? (I'm guessing :smt020 ) :smt029 Rock on!!! I liked the song because of the felling it gave me (shiver). But you could try and put some ...

Board game or the online? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? ...

I recomend that before you read this, read Melosica-Prologue, and Chapter 1,2 and part one of chapter 3. A cool breeze stirred the long black grass. Only a few years ...

True. I had to read the start three times before I got it. Firstly I want to say, good work :smt038 You have astounded me yet again. :smt023 Like said ...

When I read the subject I thought it was a joke (well not really) I was wrong........ That's a lot of description. Written in a good way, described in a ...

UUh a knight story. YAY.... Classic..... well the running away was not sooo classic, but anyways :smt038 On fourth grade you say... OK! My fourth grade stories.... SUCKED. I can ...

Neat. Good poem yet again. I am not capable of anything else than to praise. applauds :smt038 ..........................................................................................................

Ahh. So you started poems now :smt038 Great. Great work (as always.) Dramatic. Well written, all in all. Continue the greát work. *********************************************************************

:smt038 good work. A bit confusing with all the jumping :smt119 , from one place to an other. Well as said double narrator is hard. Try and simplify it a ...

RAIN. Who wouldn't like rain. You published it already? neat. :D Good for you! LORD ANZIUS WUZ HERE :smt029